At 4 and a half Luka is already expressing an aptitude at poetry that greatly surpasses his mothers. Which needless to say is not hard. I particularly like the expression of his childlike innocence, yet, already in touch with the undercurrent of the zeitgeist and the thought that someone or something else is pulling the strings.
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Ooh, excellent! I can imagine it read dramatically with performance elements and suspenseful pauses! I think a lot of what kids say and write is in the vein of abstract poetry :)
Thanks Jill, it is surely only a poem a mother could love!
The process is quite cute though, he just says whatever pops into his mind and I type.
How wonderful to have a poet in the family! I recently posted a couple of haiku by my granddaughter but she is much older than your Luka.
He sounds wonderful!
pull string for pop-off back....gawd, what do you feed this kid ?!?!
;-)
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